咨詢時間:8:00~24:00 400-618-8866

您的位置: 首頁> 考培資訊> > > 10月30日雅思筆試寫作真題全解析 | 附高分范文

10月30日雅思筆試寫作真題全解析 | 附高分范文

關鍵字  雅思寫作高分范文 雅思寫作真題解析
2021-11-01 來源:新通教育網igo.cn 作者:新通小編 閱讀量: 手機閱讀

導讀

2021年10月30日雅思筆試寫作真題

 2021年10月30日

雅思筆試寫作真題

  話題分類  
家庭教育

  大作文題目  
Nowadays, some parents put a lot of pressure on their children. What are the reasons for parents doing that? Is this a positive or negative development for the children?
  寫作思路  

本題難度系數較低,是2021年至今最簡單的考題之一,寫作思路豐富而靈活。其中審題的關鍵是要處理程度詞a lot of,以及兩問之間的邏輯關系。家庭教育的出題角度有直接談論家庭教育的重要性,也有像今天考題一樣討論錯誤的父母教育會產生的影響;如果對該話題有準備針對性的預測素材,可以輕松獲取高分!


  重點詞匯與語料  

 

granted that 即使

constant pressure 持續(xù)的壓力

intense pressure 強大的壓力

multiple 許多的

excel 超越

stiff competition 激烈的競爭

academic performance 成績

prestigious university 有名的學校

a special privilege 一個特權

live up to 不辜負

adverse consequence 不良后果

impose too much pressure 施加太大壓力

exert a life-long impact 產生終身的影響

a distorted recognition 一個扭曲的認識

gain an edge in the job market 在就業(yè)市場上獲得優(yōu)勢

educational assessment 教育評估

disastrous 災難般的

constant goal-setting 不斷設定目標

digest 消化

unhealthy defiance 不健康的反抗

self-doubt 自我懷疑

unsatisfied adulthood 失望的成年

sleep deprivation 失眠

eating disorders 飲食失調

excess stress 過量的壓力

parental pressure 父母的壓力

bring forth a nervous breakdown 產生精神崩潰

a bare necessity 必然

there is a fine line between... and... 僅一線之隔



  參考范文  


Granted that parents do expect their children to lead a successful life, they put them under constant pressure to perform. Generally, I believe that being under such intense pressure can have serious consequences in multiple areas for children. 

 

Many children are taught to compete with each other from their earliest memory so as to survive and to excel. It is true that stiff competition begins from primary school where students have to begin to remain good academic performance in order to enter a prestigious university later on. Protecting children from heart-breaking rejections is a parents’ special privilege believed by many. However, sometimes they hold the expectations too high for children to live up to. 

 

One major adverse consequence for imposing too much pressure on children is that they may easily form a negative attitude to learning, which will exert a life-long impact. Many parents have a distorted recognition that the purpose of receiving education is simply to guarantee a future career, and therefore gaining an edge in the job market is the only goal that motivates children to work hard. In this case, examinations are widely used as the sole educational assessment to evaluate the learning process, and children focus only on what is likely to be tested; thus, the educational experience is narrowed to a large extent, which can easily discourage the interests in learning. 

 

Another disastrous influence is that children who are under high amount of stress are at a greater risk of developing depression or other mental or physical health conditions. When children are dealing with the constant goal-setting by parents, they are digesting high levels of anxiety. Fear of failure can stop them from taking up new tasks or even completing the ones at hand. It can create unhealthy defiance that  leads to self-doubt or even unsatisfied adulthood. Issues, such as, sleep deprivation, eating disorders, and loss of interest in hobbies are all among the consequences for excess stress. Hence, parental pressure may bring forth a nervous breakdown.

 

To conclude, although a secure family environment is considered a bare necessity for healthy growth and development of children, there is a fine line between caring and caring too much.

劃重點。!

如果您有關于出國留學方面的問題,歡迎您來電咨詢400-618-8866或者 >>>【立即咨詢】

留學改變人生,教育改變中國!更多留學資訊,歡迎登陸新通西安留學官方網站

  • 有疑問在線咨詢老師

    咨詢時間:0:00 ~ 24:00
    非咨詢時間也可留言

  • 400-618-8866

    咨詢時間:8:00 ~ 24:00

定制備考方案
留學快讀通道

課程推薦

更多課程+

新通為您定制更適合您的學習方案

想要獲取更多考試培訓信息,可以通過以下方式聯(lián)系到距離您最近的新通教育;

1、撥打新通教育咨詢熱線:400-618-8866;

2、點擊【立即咨詢】 ,我們會有課程老師為你解答考試難題;

3、完成以下表單,輕松預約,預約獲取定制學習方案的機會。

姓名
聯(lián)系電話

城市
  • 杭州
  • 北京
  • 上海
  • 廣州
  • 深圳
  • 南京
  • 武漢
  • 蘇州
  • 太原
  • 濟南
  • 合肥
  • 天津
  • 鄭州
  • 長春
  • 寧波
  • 舟山
  • 溫州
  • 成都
  • 重慶
  • 西安
  • 南昌
  • 廈門
  • 福州
學習科目
  • 雅思
  • 托福
  • SAT
  • ACT
  • GRE
  • GMAT
  • 國際高中備考班
  • A-level
  • AP
馬上預約

定制學習方案

  • 雅思
  • 托福
  • SAT
  • ACT
  • GRE
  • GMAT
  • 國際高中備考班
  • A-level
  • AP
獲取你的學習方案

*溫馨提示:新通承諾絕不泄露您的個人信息

大家都在看

更多>

近期活動

  • 北京
  • 成都
  • 福州
  • 廣州
  • 杭州
  • 合肥
  • 濟南
  • 南昌
  • 南京
  • 寧波
  • 青島
  • 廈門
  • 上海
  • 深圳
  • 蘇州
  • 太原
  • 天津
  • 溫州
  • 武漢
  • 西安
  • 長春
  • 長沙
  • 鄭州
  • 重慶
  • 舟山