2021年10月30日雅思筆試寫作真題
2021年10月30日
本題難度系數較低,是2021年至今最簡單的考題之一,寫作思路豐富而靈活。其中審題的關鍵是要處理程度詞a lot of,以及兩問之間的邏輯關系。家庭教育的出題角度有直接談論家庭教育的重要性,也有像今天考題一樣討論錯誤的父母教育會產生的影響;如果對該話題有準備針對性的預測素材,可以輕松獲取高分!
granted that 即使
constant pressure 持續(xù)的壓力
intense pressure 強大的壓力
multiple 許多的
excel 超越
stiff competition 激烈的競爭
academic performance 成績
prestigious university 有名的學校
a special privilege 一個特權
live up to 不辜負
adverse consequence 不良后果
impose too much pressure 施加太大壓力
exert a life-long impact 產生終身的影響
a distorted recognition 一個扭曲的認識
gain an edge in the job market 在就業(yè)市場上獲得優(yōu)勢
educational assessment 教育評估
disastrous 災難般的
constant goal-setting 不斷設定目標
digest 消化
unhealthy defiance 不健康的反抗
self-doubt 自我懷疑
unsatisfied adulthood 失望的成年
sleep deprivation 失眠
eating disorders 飲食失調
excess stress 過量的壓力
parental pressure 父母的壓力
bring forth a nervous breakdown 產生精神崩潰
a bare necessity 必然
there is a fine line between... and... 僅一線之隔
Granted that parents do expect their children to lead a successful life, they put them under constant pressure to perform. Generally, I believe that being under such intense pressure can have serious consequences in multiple areas for children.
Many children are taught to compete with each other from their earliest memory so as to survive and to excel. It is true that stiff competition begins from primary school where students have to begin to remain good academic performance in order to enter a prestigious university later on. Protecting children from heart-breaking rejections is a parents’ special privilege believed by many. However, sometimes they hold the expectations too high for children to live up to.
One major adverse consequence for imposing too much pressure on children is that they may easily form a negative attitude to learning, which will exert a life-long impact. Many parents have a distorted recognition that the purpose of receiving education is simply to guarantee a future career, and therefore gaining an edge in the job market is the only goal that motivates children to work hard. In this case, examinations are widely used as the sole educational assessment to evaluate the learning process, and children focus only on what is likely to be tested; thus, the educational experience is narrowed to a large extent, which can easily discourage the interests in learning.
Another disastrous influence is that children who are under high amount of stress are at a greater risk of developing depression or other mental or physical health conditions. When children are dealing with the constant goal-setting by parents, they are digesting high levels of anxiety. Fear of failure can stop them from taking up new tasks or even completing the ones at hand. It can create unhealthy defiance that leads to self-doubt or even unsatisfied adulthood. Issues, such as, sleep deprivation, eating disorders, and loss of interest in hobbies are all among the consequences for excess stress. Hence, parental pressure may bring forth a nervous breakdown.
To conclude, although a secure family environment is considered a bare necessity for healthy growth and development of children, there is a fine line between caring and caring too much.
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