雅思寫作常見的語病分析

在雅思寫作考試中紅，希望寫出一篇不錯的文章，合理運用語法是非常重要的手段，但是語法不扎實的話，寫出來的句子大都是病句。那么，小編整理了雅思寫作常見的語病分析，希望可以幫助到大家。

1.雙謂語錯句

eg. For those under 26， there were 80% students study for career.

There be句型屬于雙謂語錯句高發(fā)句型，因為句中的be動詞已經(jīng)是謂語，而句子后面的動詞通常是定語從句中的成分，故不能作為主句中的謂語。例句中同時出現(xiàn)了“were”和“study”，根據(jù)上面的分析，were應(yīng)該是謂語，而study for career應(yīng)該是定語從句，因此，例句應(yīng)修正改成：

For those under 26， there were 80% students who studied for career. 或者For those under 26， there were 80% students studying for career.

2.句子不完整

eg. The most popular kind of transport was by road.

句中主語是the most popular kind of transport，謂語動詞(系動詞)是was， 而by road按照語法應(yīng)該是方式狀語，此句缺乏表語。應(yīng)改成：

The most popular kind of transport was road.

3.主系表結(jié)構(gòu)使用錯誤

eg. We are impossible to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.

此句的主干結(jié)構(gòu)是：we are impossible“我們是不可能”，表意不對。這種表達在英語中對應(yīng)的句型是：It is…for…to…， 所以應(yīng)該改成：

It is impossible for us to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.

4.情態(tài)動詞后的動詞原形和動名詞的使用出錯

eg.Another point to be discussed is that more time spending on computers is harmful to children’s mental health.

這種錯誤可能是筆誤，在雅思作文中偶爾出現(xiàn)不至于扣分，但是通篇都是這樣的錯誤，那么肯定是有影響的。

“花更多時間在電腦上”這個動詞短語作為主語應(yīng)該要用動名詞形式：

Another point to be discussed is that spending more time on computers is harmful to children’s mental health.

5.標(biāo)點符號用錯

eg. As far as I am concerned， people should take exercise and relax themselves on a weekly basis. Because it offers great opportunities to release their stress.

Because引導(dǎo)的句子做原因狀語從句，既然是從句，那么前面就不應(yīng)該使用句號使其獨立成句，而應(yīng)該改成逗號，because首字母小寫。

6.詞性使用錯誤

eg. One possible solution is using the new energy to instead of the traditional energy.

Instead of是介詞，而這里構(gòu)成to do(不定式)，只能用動詞。因此，可改為：

One possible solution is using the new energy to replace the traditional energy.

7.從句的誤用和濫用

eg. The reason why I assert it is necessary for government to provide better education and health care for rural areas because it can ensure all citizens to have access to them.

“why…rural areas”在句中作the reason的定語，固定句式“the reason why…is that…”why引導(dǎo)的定語從句和that引導(dǎo)的表語從句連用，氣勢磅礴，這就是所謂的高分句型。

eg. In this essay， I will discuss what those， who are two kinds of people in this topic， are how to think and how to choose. 實再迂回婉轉(zhuǎn)，不知所云。