本期為同學們分享的是托福寫作范文。
托福寫作范文是我們學習托福寫作的一個重要方法,希望本期新通教育西安托福老師為同學們帶來的托福寫作賞析能夠起到幫助作用。
Parents give their children weekly money to buy whatever they want. Some people think this can cause bad habits and ideas about money in children.
In this day and age, parents in China tend to spend almost all their savings on children, hoping that they can outcompete peers by obtaining more outstanding skills, let alone weekly money. However, some experts worry that children will spoiled by parents and lose the ability to their living. As far as I am concerned, I contend that parents can give their children limited weekly money, which can not only cultivate their habits of money management but also relieve their burden.
Initially, weekly money from parents enables children to concentrate on academic development without worrying how to sustain their daily lives(分論點1). As we can see, schools in China put increasingly emphasize on study, so students are always bombard with a large amount of tasks such as assignments, presentations and exams. Therefore, they have no time for extracurricular activities or even entertainments. Without weekly money, they will lead a considerably miserable life, striving to find a balance between preparing school works and doing part-time jobs. Take myself as example, I chose 12 courses last semester, joined an internship program and participated in 3 mathematics competitions. Since I have been longing for being accepted by the postgraduate program of my dream school, I got mountains of things to deal with. Had it not been my parents’ support, I would not have been fight my way out during these though days.
In addition, someone may assert that weekly money causes bad habits and ideas about money in children, stating that children will take the money for granted and spend it without restriction.(分論點2) Also, they suggest that forcing children to do part-time jobs helps to enhance their abilities of living by themselves and relieve parents’ burden. However, plausible as it sounds, the idea dos not hold water. Parents can grab opportunities to teach their children how to manage their money efficiently. What’s more, they can share opinions on how to allocate asset among several financial markets such as stock market, bond market and monetary market. On the one hand, after raising children’s consciousness of money management, they are less likely to spend money at will but calculate precisely before buying their favorable things. Meanwhile, children can apply for student loans instead of wasting precious time on repetitive and simple tasks, since they cannot afford to pay the price for falling behind others academically.
In conclusion, considering all the factors above, I firmly insist that parents offer weekly money to children. Only in this way can children get to know practical skills of money management and ensure their academic performance.
1:范文的中心論點是?
中心論點: I contend that parents can give their children limited weekly money, which can not only cultivate their habits of money management but also relieve their burden.
2:范文的分論點是?
分論點1:Initially, weekly money from parents enables children to concentrate on academic development without worrying how to sustain their daily lives.
分論點2:In addition, someone may assert that weekly money causes bad habits and ideas about money in children, stating that children will take the money for granted and spend it without restriction.
3:作者在文章中用到了哪些論證方法?
In this day and age, parents in China tend to spend almost all their savings on children, hoping that they can outcompete peers by obtaining more outstanding skills, let alone weekly money. However, some experts worry that children will spoiled by parents and lose the ability to their living. As far as I am concerned, I contend that parents can give their children limited weekly money, which can not only cultivate their habits of money management but also relieve their burden.
Initially, weekly money from parents enables children to concentrate on academic development without worrying how to sustain their daily lives(分論點1). As we can see, schools in China put increasingly emphasize on study, so students are always bombard with a large amount of tasks such as assignments, presentations and exams. Therefore(因果論證), they have no time for extracurricular activities or even entertainments. Without weekly money, they will lead a considerably miserable life, striving to find a balance between preparing school works and doing part-time jobs. Take myself as example(舉例論證), I chose 12 courses last semester, joined an internship program and participated in 3 mathematics competitions. Since I have been longing for being accepted by the postgraduate program of my dream school, I got mountains of things to deal with. Had it not been my parents’ support, I would not have been fight my way out during these though days.
In addition, someone may assert that weekly money causes bad habits and ideas about money in children, stating that children will take the money for granted and spend it without restriction.(分論點2) Also, they suggest that forcing children to do part-time jobs helps to enhance their abilities of living by themselves and relieve parents’ burden. However, plausible as it sounds, the idea dos not hold water. Parents can grab opportunities to teach their children how to manage their money efficiently. What’s more*舉例論證, they can share opinions on how to allocate asset among several financial markets such as stock market, bond market and monetary market. On the one hand, after raising children’s consciousness of money management, they are less likely to spend money at will but calculate precisely before buying their favorable things. Meanwhile, children can apply for student loans instead of wasting precious time on repetitive and simple tasks, since(因果論證) they cannot afford to pay the price for falling behind others academically.
In conclusion, considering all the factors above, I firmly insist that parents offer weekly money to children. Only in this way can children get to know practical skills of money management and ensure their academic performance.
4:作者是如何展開自己的觀點的?是如何說清楚自己的思路的?
如何展開一個觀點,關(guān)鍵在于是否能夠靈活運用論證方式。主體段基本遵循總分結(jié)構(gòu),即寫一個主旨句,再圍繞主旨句用各種論證方法進行充分的拓展和論證。我們常用的論證方法有:舉例論證,對比論證,原因論證,結(jié)果論證,解釋說明,,假設(shè)論證。
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